Lovely article. Just some friendly tips!
Achive = Achieve
it greates = its Greatest
i = I
i order = in order
To help society achive it greates potential is my advocacy. =
My advocacy is to help society achieve its greatest potential
Congratulations on getting your degree and may it be just the beginning of a promising and successful career. Best of luck!
Please remember that you are dealing with people. Treat them kindly and keep in mind that everyone's situation is personal to them. Don't treat them like a science experiment or a number.
Hey, I'm not kidding... Have you done any studies on social interbred behavior? Lake George will give you the insight to write a book...